It all started in Egypt. . .

25 09 2011
I may or may not have an unhealthy obsession with Molotov Cocktails and/or revolutions and/or riots. Regardless, I’m pretty stoked about the imagery I constructed in this haiku. Please leave me criticisms.

Cheers, darling.
by Cherise Benton

Sometimes bridges just
need to be set on fire.
Molotov cocktails

for you, dearest, and
for me, too. A toast to mark
our last kiss goodbye.

I lit the candle
and dropped the match between us,
smiled at the flames.

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9 responses

25 09 2011
TheRantingRaven

Hate Haiku poetry. Like this. Something to be said.

26 09 2011
peasantlola

Fair enough.

25 09 2011
meesh

mmmhmm i feel the heat. in my trousers.

26 09 2011
Easy Living

Very well written. I really enjoyed reading today’s post very much. Thanks for sharing this.

Please read and recommend – Raining Purple Rain

26 09 2011
peasantlola

Thank you all :)

26 09 2011
Chef Salad

Break up tag?

26 09 2011
peasantlola

Tis. I’m experimenting with cheating at generating traffic. So far it’s working.

26 09 2011
peasantlola

Actually it’s working very, very well. So there.

21 02 2012
Lee Boyle

I like these.

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